The Wall must fall!
Matthew Del
Bosque
Emperor Qin
must shut down all work and maintenance on the Great Wall. The wall is killing
tons of citizens in the process of building it. To keep working on the wall
will bring down China. We are building something that is taking more lives than
it is saving! This wall was meant to keep us safe from the invading Mongolians
to the north, but has it really done anything, other than killing our own
people?
Building the
Great Wall has barely stopped the enemy; they still can find ways to get in.
They can simply climb over the wall, or devise an elaborate plan such as
distracting multiple guard towers with a small army, while a much large army
attacks from another or entirely different side. This would leave China
defenseless. Emperor Qin has also committed the bold act of killing off 460
brilliant scholars, only because they had defied him and his decisions. This is
childish a act. Our people are dying because of the creation of the wall. Emperor
Qin favors his palace over the worker’s safety and health. He would rather
spend a fortune on luxuries such as silk, gold, and foreign treasures, than
actually build simple tools and supplements to help our people stay alive.
Some would
oppose to these opinions, based on the fact that Emperor Qin’s defense and
military has never been more powerful. Other also may fancy the perk of the
wall actually slowing down large armies, allowing China’s Empire to mobilize
its defenses. But already it is costing more lives and money to keep it from
breaking apart. The money, labor, and time put into this wall have been wasted
at this point!
The wall is
nothing but a life taker, causing us to lose men by the thousands! Instead of building
the pointless wall, we actually could have of trained our armies,
or advanced our technology and weaponry. But the time that we could have used
to do all of that is gone. The wall must come down! To prevent us from wasting
even more time, money, and men.
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